{SoE}Bhane|SH|
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Post by {SoE}Bhane|SH| on Jan 18, 2009 10:02:15 GMT -5
It would be appreciated if you would give me a detailed summary of your person on here. The more detailed, the better. It should look similar to this: Name: Bhane Lemnai Age: 21 Sex: Male Bio: A young member of Coruscant who, upon discovery of an ancient people known as the Arldas, became what many call a vampire. Going unnoticed by his family for a number of days, the young man ran away at the age of 17 only to be found by a Sith known as Revan. Seeing the child's abilities could be of good use, Revan took Bhane under his wing. (Of course more is required, but this is just a short snippit). Description: Pale skinned with blazing red eyes and a dark aura. Deep black hair and a wicked goatee. (Also, of course, complete sentences and DEEP detail would be appreciated). It's for a surprise, if you do it you'll be in for a big treat!
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Post by ~†{§øÊ}§lator|JI|†~ on Jan 18, 2009 11:28:34 GMT -5
I'm not active but I still check the website so here ya go for meh:
Name:Slator Vertigo Age:20 Sex:Male Bio:Born and raised on the peaceful side of Naboo. At an early age was attacked by the Trade Federation. With the help of my father I escaped to the Valley of the Jedi where I got my ulimited power. Unfortunatly, I turned to the darkness within me. Eventually, there came a woman in my life. I loved her with all my heart and would die for her love. The sith did not like this relationship and assassnated her. With the hatred flowing inside me, I killed everyone involved in her death. And after all the regret and redemption, I gained the forgivness of the Jedi Council. I serve them still, fighting the people who destroyed my heart. Eventually, they have givin' me the rank of WarLord. And, through time, I have gained the ability to weild both sides of the force without being corrupted. Description:Light skin with one white eye and one brown eye. Long, grey, metallic, white hair, frizzeled somewhat with mustache and goatee. Hight:5'10" Weight:155.0lbs
There, I tried, sorta, XD, hope ya like it.
And for the record, I made this up. I'm currently writing a better story and sorry, but it's not starwars related, but neway, go with this.
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{SoE}Bhane|SH|
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Fear not what tomorrow brings, instead think of how you can make it better.
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Post by {SoE}Bhane|SH| on Jan 18, 2009 11:51:59 GMT -5
Way to think outside the box. This works, thanks.
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{SoE}Bhane|SH|
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Fear not what tomorrow brings, instead think of how you can make it better.
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Post by {SoE}Bhane|SH| on Jan 18, 2009 11:55:26 GMT -5
Also, a photo that you believe would do your person justice would be helpful as well.
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Post by {SoE}Syxx|SL| on Jan 18, 2009 14:28:28 GMT -5
Name:Syxx (Last Name Never Assigned) Age:24 Sex:Male Bio:I spent the first 20 years of my life in a containment facility undergoing experiments of the cruelest nature. They used to take my body and see just how far they could push it, then leave me hanging on to life by a thread. My hellish captivity would continue until one fateful event occurred. Someone managed to break into the facility. When I first heard the news, I thought nothing of it. But when a stranger wielding a lightsaber opened my cell and reached for my hand, I saw my opportunity. Once we were outside and a fairly good distance from the facility, I tried to get my savior to give me a name. The only response I managed to get was the stranger to pull back their hood. Underneath the hood was a woman with crimson eyes and golden hair. We started walking, mostly silently, until she asked a single question: "You are Project 6, correct?" I simply nodded, trying to forget what happened in the Hell that we had just escaped. She continued. "I know of what they have done to you. All I ask now is that you allow me to prepare you for your vengeance. If you train under me, you will be more then capable of bringing down the entire facility." I thought on the notion for a very brief moment. It didn't take long for me to agree to this woman's offer. Then, I spoke. "What would you have me call you by?" Her response was simply "Mother". Description: Slender, athletic body, black hair, green eyes.
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Post by Serenity on Jan 18, 2009 15:15:22 GMT -5
Well i would make a post, but after looking at this, Carmine is from gears....... So having a guy born from Sera would make no sense... and.... gears has no sabers D:. but meh. if you want ill come up wit some thing thats totaly un-related to starwars lol.
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Post by ~†{§øÊ}§lator|JI|†~ on Jan 19, 2009 8:33:41 GMT -5
And if ya need a pic from meh, use my sig. I guess, heh. Or my profile pic.
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{SoE}Bhane|SH|
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Fear not what tomorrow brings, instead think of how you can make it better.
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Post by {SoE}Bhane|SH| on Jan 19, 2009 9:49:53 GMT -5
Gotcha. Keep em coming guys et gals.
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Post by {SoE}TROGGI|SK| on Jan 21, 2009 1:21:51 GMT -5
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Post by Kowro Wefai on Jan 21, 2009 9:42:09 GMT -5
Name: Kowro Wefai
bio: its in a rather lenghty unfinished post in 'creative writing'
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Post by {SoE}Draco|JW| on Jan 21, 2009 13:47:12 GMT -5
Nane: Draco
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Bio: I was born on naboo, as I grew, I started to steal due to being from a poor family. One day I was caught stealing from the palace and was arrested and sentenced to die, when a cloaked figure came up and ask what the charges were. After which the stranger asked that i be pardoned and as part of it he would take me and show me the way of justice and peace,so i was taken from the only place i had every known as home and put on a ship with this stranger and i did not even know his name. As we left my home planet I asked the stranger, " so what shall I call you?",and the stranger replied " you may call me Ithy,or master whatever you chose",I looked upon the man and said why would i call you master? He simply replied because I will be teaching you the way of the JEDI !!as time went on i learned many things from my master ithy and still do to this day and i am proud to be called his padawan .
btw as a general description of me think of a short linebacker with brown hair/eyes and that looks like he can smash you like a bug,thats really all i can think of for now and i know it prlly isnt that good but wth i gave it a b- lolz
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Post by KenShiN.H on Jan 23, 2009 2:54:53 GMT -5
Name: Kenshin Himura Age:19 Sex: Male Bio: Kenshin is not sure where he was born because he was always going to many different worlds. At the age of 15 he ran into a Sith Master who seemed to be in a rush. The sith stopped dead in his tracks because he was overwhelmed at the power that was emanating from Kenshin. He instantly thought that Ken was a Jedi and was there to kill him, when the reality was that Ken didn't have a clue about his power. So the sith master took him on as a apprentice. As time went by Ken saw the sheer power of the sith and how no one was able to stand in the way of him and his master. But like all sith Ken wanted more power so he decided to train without his master knowing, trying to hone his skillz till one day he could kill his master. After training alone for many months Ken decided to try his skills against a jedi he happened to run into. The jedi didn't last more than 1 min. So Ken decided that it was time to kill his master. As he approached his master Ken realized that his master had been waiting for this day since he found him. As the battle raged on and the anger between him and his master grew higher and higher, he began to realize that the madder he got the slower his reflexes were. So he began to calm himself down, as he did so his master was all of a sudden becoming predictable. As the battle began to come to an end the master realized he didn't stand a chance because Ken learned to control his emotions rather than allow them to control him. So as he cut his masters head off he realized that the sith way isn't always the best way. This is when he decided to become a jedi. He kept training trying to hone his saber skill to the point that everyone who faced him would tremble. So now Ken protects all who are weaker than him for the mere fact that no one should be put down. But he knows that deep down he is still a sith at heart. (Ignore grammar mistakes, i'm tired)
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{SoE}Bhane|SH|
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Fear not what tomorrow brings, instead think of how you can make it better.
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Post by {SoE}Bhane|SH| on Jan 23, 2009 6:38:42 GMT -5
Thanks everyone, it's looking good.
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Post by Chike-BEASTS YOU ALL on Jan 23, 2009 23:07:09 GMT -5
(Trust me josh ) Name: Chike Laeman Age: 18 Bio: If one is to understand the complex history of this young one, then a brief history of his father is required. Name: Jedi Padawan Luster Laeman-aka Darth Antrix of the new Sith Age: 27 At a young age, Luster was born of spastic dark deeds, that he eventually grew out of. He was taken in as a padawan by the Jedi Order, and there he served as the padawan learner of Jedi Knight Chrippe Sandee. Throughout his time as a Jedi he had ongoing battles with his cousin of the New Sith, Darth Moose, and Moose ultimately turned him to the Dark side. Being of a cleverer mind than most Sith, Luster staged his own death within the Jedi Order so that he could escape and deal with his training as a sith apprentice. After a couple of years of evil he hoorahed with a young woman and had his first son, Darren Laeman, who he forsook with his immediate family on Coruscant. Current archives would classify Darren Laeman as Bhane Lemnai. Just a few years later he spawned his second youngling, Chike. This is his saga. Rather than follow the footsteps of his competitive brother, Chike felt his abilities best served the light. He soon found that he was skilled in several forms of communication and was the perfect negotiator and could coax anything out of anyone. Ideal attributes for a Sith, no? The Dark Side does run in the family, at any rate. When he was young, his brother went missing and he and his family thought him dead. Years later, as a Jedi, they were reunited on less than happy terms, and sense then they have battled each other constantly, although Chike can never bring himself to kill his brother. As for his father, he grew to be so powerful that he went into hibernation in an unknown area to ponder the greater darkness and how to utilize it in the future. Needless to say, he found some sort of secret that keeps him alive even to this day. Chike was destined for great things. At the age of twelve he rescued a family from a burning Coruscant building with naught but a training saber and two thermal detonators. After that it was smooth sailing. Chike is tall and tan, with brown hair and eyes. He has a scar over his eye, he can't remember who gave it to him, his father or his brother. Whatever the case, Chike Laeman is and will be a great jedi in the making.
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